The voices in my head
Want me to go to bed
Cannot hear a single voice say
Wakeup! Shine! It’s a new day
My mind goes blank
As I see someone online do a plank
Insecurities creep in
Wish I could throw them in the bin
The work is due tomorrow
I should rather be in sorrow
People say that life’s a test
Who’ll help me get out of this quest
This hectic life tires me
What if my boss fires me
Let’s take a moment out of this mess
We will find a way out soon I guess
Wish I could fly high
Beyond the sky
Out with the clouds
With no concern of my whereabouts.
37 Responses
Very good poem excellent
The way you uses these words are commendable.
May god bless you for the future
Very Nice and wonderful poem. Chetanya keep it up. God bless you
Very good perspective. Well expressed …al the best for future…
Superb dear “🍒…… “”Wow.
I appreciate her thinking skills.😌💓
Great job! Keep going
Very deepest thought …..Great writings ….Keep writings dear …..
Deep insight poem,very touching
Very beautiful bacchha..may God bless you.
BRAVO…Very beautiful bacchha..may God bless you.
Chetanya dear very nice poem.
Keep it up
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Glad to know that u r also selected for national writer of the week…keep it up chet ✨
“Storytelling is the most powerful way to put ideas into the world today” “So wonderful story”
OP Sister Keep it up !
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i am from kvs ina colony new delhi. class 9thc
Very good poem
Heart touching & expressive lines..
Keep it up dear !!!!
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V thoughtful poem ,apt for these times.My dearest kiddo u will surely shine.
Well composed….. keep it up Chetan. Stay blessed
Great Poem
I really like it.
Keep it Beta
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Keep writing…….
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Your imagination and the way you use that imagination is just unbelievable.
Very nice dear … Keep it up
Beautiful lines chetanya… Keep it up
God bless you
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Keep it up beta
God bless you