12 Years

2014-03-09 Years

South Point High School

Kolkata

The Rain House I Story By Prodhee

The Rain House I Story By Prodhee

The Rain House

For three endless days, rain descended upon the little town of Eldenmere with a cold and mournful persistence. Water streamed through the narrow streets and chimneys vanished behind drifting fog. At the edge of the town, upon a lonely hill beyond the forest path, stood Rain House — an enormous mansion darkened by age and silence. Its windows were dim with dust and ivy twisted across its stone walls. The villagers never spoke of the house without lowering their voices. According to them, the owner of the Rain House — Arthur Vale — had vanished many years ago during a violent storm, along with his young son, Elias. No explanation was ever discovered.

Sixteen-year-old Clara Whitmore had heard these stories since childhood, yet she had never truly believed them. She possessed a restless and inquisitive mind. But on one storm-ridden evening, while sitting beside her bedroom window, Clara heard a slow knocking upon the glass outside. Beneath the pale glow of the street lamp stood a boy about her own age. Rainwater streamed from his dark coat; his face appeared ghostly beneath the flickering light and his gray eyes carried a strange sorrow that unsettled her instantly. Without speaking, he raised one hand and pointed toward the distant hill where Rain House stood hidden behind rain and fog. Then, in a brief flash of lightning that illuminated the whole street, he vanished completely.

The experience haunted Clara through the night. But by the following afternoon, curiosity had entirely overcome caution. Beneath the heavy grey sky, she followed the narrow forest path leading toward the mansion. Wet leaves covered the ground, branches twisted overhead, and the air carried the cold fragrance of rain-soaked earth. As she approached the rusted iron gates an unpleasant cold sensation descended upon her.

The moment Clara stepped inside, the rumbling of thunder outside seemed to fade to a distant whisper. Silence consumed the walls. Dust drifted through the cold air. Portraits lined the walls like memories trapped beneath cracked glass. All of them were dusty and faded, except one. A painting of a pale young boy. Clara stopped short when she saw it. The same boy from her sleepless nights stared back at her from the canvas.

Clara suddenly saw a half-open bedroom door. She crept in and saw a young boy standing in front of a window, listening to the rain. He turned and Clara sucked in a breath.

Elias Vale.

“Clara… I have been waiting for you.”

His voice sounded fragile, almost exhausted, as if loneliness itself had worn him down.

For a long while, Elias simply listened to the rain.

Then, very softly, he whispered —

“My father loves me very much.”

This abrupt change of topic caught Clara completely off-guard.

Loves

Not loved

As though death itself had never changed it.

“After my mother’s passing, the house became quiet.”

Another abrupt change. Clara was becoming more and more curious.

Elias finally revealed the mystery which hung over the Rain House.

Arthur Vale had once been a loving and caring father. Elias remembered evenings beside the fireplace when his father played the piano and his mother laughed softly nearby. Rain had once sounded comforting to them. But after her death, silence settled in the Rain House like snowfall. Arthur stopped opening the curtains or playing the piano. Servants began leaving one by one after hearing him wandering the halls late at night speaking to empty rooms.

“He tried not to cry in front of me,” Elias said, “but sometimes I heard him through the walls.”

Arthur carried a silver pocket watch everywhere after that. It had belonged to Elias’s mother. Inside the lid rested a small photograph of her smiling beneath summer sunlight.

“He used to hold it whenever he missed her,” Elias said. “…which was… always.”

“On the last night, my father looked very tired.”

Arthur was sitting alone inside the study beside the faint fireplace while rain hammered against the mansion hard enough to shake the glass.

Elias entered quietly.

Empty bottles of whisky were littered around Arthur. The silver pocket watch rested on the table beside him.

“I wanted to see my mother again,” he said to Clara.

He reached for the watch.

But, in one split-second, he dropped it.

The silver struck down the marble floor.

The sound shattered the grim silence of the mansion.

Elias lowered his head.

“My father looked at me, as if his heart stopped beating.”

Elias knelt slowly beside the shattered pieces, clutching and wringing his hands.

Then, suddenly, every candle in the study extinguished at once.

Arthur panicked.

Elias remembered his father staring wildly into the corners of the study, as though someone unseen stood waiting there.

Arthur Vale’s fear and grief suddenly gave way to rage. His eyes flashed with murderous intensity. He picked up an empty bottle and threw it at Elias.

Not cruelty.

Only one terrible moment borne from fear, confusion, grief and a shattered mind.

Elias could remember no more.

Clara had listened to the story in amazement. Momentarily, the fear that had gripped her had vanished completely, its place taken by sympathy and sadness.

“But… thanks… er… why are you telling me this?” she asked.

Elias smiled bitterly.

“Sharing grief with someone makes the burden feel lighter.”

“Nice meeting you, Clara. I think I chose well.”

He vanished into thin air.

Clara’s feet started as if they had a mind of their own. By the time she regained her bearings, she was out — at the forest path leading to the village. She hunched over her knees, and only then did she realize tears were streaming down her cheeks.

Days passed. The storm disappeared. Eldenmere slowly returned to ordinary life. Yet every midnight, Clara heard piano music drifting through the distance, soft as memory and cold as fog. One sleepless night, unable to resist the dreadful mystery any longer, she looked through her bedroom window toward the distant hill where Rain House stood. Through the rain-soaked trees, the highest window of the mansion glimmered faintly through the darkness.

As she turned back, she noticed something that made her heart grow cold. On the bed, beside her pillow, was a silver pocket watch. She looked at the watch and curled back in horror. Upon the cracked glass, it was written:

Sorrow waits patiently.

Hooded figure with dark magical smoke in an old, candlelit library

FAQs : The Rain House I Story By Prodhee

Who is the main character of the story?
The main character is Clara, a brave and curious girl who finds herself drawn into the mystery surrounding Rain House.

What happened during the storm?
A strange and powerful storm affected Eldenmere and seemed connected to the eerie events taking place at Rain House.

Why did Clara run out of the mansion?
Clara’s feet appeared to move on their own, as if controlled by an unseen force, causing her to flee toward the village.

What mysterious sound does Clara hear after the storm ends?
Every midnight, she hears haunting piano music drifting through the darkness, reminding her of the secrets hidden within Rain House.

What is Rain House?
Rain House is an old mansion on a distant hill, shrouded in mystery and connected to the strange events in the story.

Why does Clara look out of her bedroom window one night?
Unable to resist the mystery any longer, she looks toward Rain House and notices a faint light glowing in its highest window.

What unexpected object appears beside Clara’s pillow?
A silver pocket watch mysteriously appears on her bed while she is in her room.

What makes the pocket watch frightening?
The watch has cracked glass and bears a chilling message that seems directed at Clara.

What message is written on the pocket watch?
The message reads: “Sorrow waits patiently.”

Does the story have a happy ending?
The ending is mysterious and suspenseful, leaving readers wondering what the message means and whether Clara’s encounter with Rain House is truly over.

What genre is this story?
It is a mystery-horror story with supernatural elements and a suspenseful atmosphere.

What themes are explored in the story?
The story explores curiosity, fear, mystery, courage, and the idea that some secrets refuse to stay buried.

Why is the piano music important to the story?
The piano music serves as a haunting reminder that the mystery of Rain House continues even after the storm has passed.

What makes the ending memorable?
The sudden appearance of the pocket watch and its ominous message create a chilling final twist that stays with readers long after the story ends.

Who would enjoy reading this book?
Readers who enjoy spooky mysteries, supernatural adventures, and suspenseful stories will likely enjoy Sorrow Waits Patiently.

Where can you buy the books?

You can buy the books at Bookosmia and Amazon.

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