Eight planets of the solar system
Space space so much to learn
Eight planets full of knowledge to earn.
Mercury, Venus, Earth and Mars
We live on Earth, it spins for 24 hours.
Jupiter and Saturn
We have four directions – Northern, Southern, Western and Eastern.
There are two more – Uranus and Neptune
Not all planets have moons.
These are the eight planets, all happy and bright
Earth is our home, so please let’s keep things right.
26 Responses
The poem is very beautiful. I liked it alot.
Lovely thought and awesomely written .. Learnt about the planets today in fun way…
It was a very pleasant poem to read. I really like it.
Beautiful poem
very good & knowledgeable poem by kid
Super. Kaavya. All the best
Very Nicely written
Keep it up – Stay Blessed
Superb creation by dear Kavya🤗Best wishes for many more ….for the budding poet🙌
Kaavya, very well composed keeping in mind the basic principles of a poem. All the best. 👍👍👍👍
Awesome. Keep writing
Beautiful poem Kaavya, you have kept it simple yet rhymed it so beautifully.. Keep it up beta. God bless you😍
Great effort and a good poem.
So nice poem kavya. Keep it up.👍😊 All the best dear ❤️
Awsome poem ! Brilliant Job !❤️
Nice
V. good Brilliant Job Kavya 👍
Very Good Kavya
Good luck 👍
Very Good Kavya
Nicely written
Keep it up 👍
Lovely thoughts, Kaavya. May the force of lovely thoughts be with you, always.
Lovely thoughts, Kaavya. May the force of intellect be with you, always. Godspeed.
Written very well. All the best
Very good Kavya👍
Beautiful, keep it up dear.
Rhyming poem with a social message too!
Kudos!
Superb Kaavya
Wish you good luck in all your further endeavours
Great poem, Kaavya! Look forward to more poetry from you in future. Best wishes!